Correction: Ellison Dorin

Correction of 's drawing for .

I hope this is able to help you. <3 This is my first mini walkthrough thing, haha. I hope it looks decent.

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A few notes that wouldn't fit on the paper:
A male's body is very blocky, but you should still add in curves just like the female's body. Making the body completely square makes it look unnatural, so you should add curves when you can.

Be sure to study actual figures, or even your own body. xD This really helps to get the lines down (just be sure people don't catch you staring at them, haha OTL )

The hair flows down from the top of the head, so make sure it looks as such. Adding some hair that juts out from behind the ears will make the ears look naturally placed on the head, as I did in my correction.
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Any further questions, feel free to ask. :3 Sorry I couldn't do it in traditional, my scanner is a total butt when it comes to scanning. :T

Keep up the good work! ^^

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